Sunday, March 25, 2007

My 2nd Lyrical Composition @ 1:38 PM

Because I couldn't sleep last night
So I end up writing another lyrics.
Hm... In a inspiring mode these days?
In an attempt to sound more cheem then the previous one,
i tried a more descriptive approach, and inserted some analogies (even though the r cliche? haha!)
so
Tada!

忘却

那一年的夏天
多希望再重演
但事实与画面
离的距离遥远

她的出现
成了我们的据点
那一瞬间
仿佛冰冷的冬天

回到初遇海边
奢望回到原点
最后冷静发现
什么都已改变

你说过的永远
跟随海浪浮潜
渐渐若隐若现
直到消失不见

虽然很不甘愿
也曾一直埋怨
望着深蓝海面
浪水淹没石岩
直到夜晚沉淀

哭过，又是新的一天
算一算时间
原来已经到了春天


Behind the scenes:
I came up with that at about 3 am yesterday?
then after i finished i realise there is no one significant verse that can be the chorus
so i saw charlene online and say
"Oh NO!!!! I wrote a lyrics.. but i got not chorusssss!!!!"

so charlene gave me ideas...
she added 你说过的永远, 跟随海浪飘远。
but course i didnt like the idea of having repeated words at the end of 2 consecutive sentence
I changed it to
你说过的永远
跟随海浪浮潜
and also other other things
most imptly, she help me think of title!
ah but this is probably a rough draft though.. course if the music ever comes up...
I would need to change the sentence structure.. or the number of words.. etc...

but I am suppose to be studying now..
hahahahahahahha

Sunday, March 25, 2007

My 2nd Lyrical Composition @ 1:38 PM

Because I couldn't sleep last night
So I end up writing another lyrics.
Hm... In a inspiring mode these days?
In an attempt to sound more cheem then the previous one,
i tried a more descriptive approach, and inserted some analogies (even though the r cliche? haha!)
so
Tada!

忘却

那一年的夏天
多希望再重演
但事实与画面
离的距离遥远

她的出现
成了我们的据点
那一瞬间
仿佛冰冷的冬天

回到初遇海边
奢望回到原点
最后冷静发现
什么都已改变

你说过的永远
跟随海浪浮潜
渐渐若隐若现
直到消失不见

虽然很不甘愿
也曾一直埋怨
望着深蓝海面
浪水淹没石岩
直到夜晚沉淀

哭过，又是新的一天
算一算时间
原来已经到了春天


Behind the scenes:
I came up with that at about 3 am yesterday?
then after i finished i realise there is no one significant verse that can be the chorus
so i saw charlene online and say
"Oh NO!!!! I wrote a lyrics.. but i got not chorusssss!!!!"

so charlene gave me ideas...
she added 你说过的永远, 跟随海浪飘远。
but course i didnt like the idea of having repeated words at the end of 2 consecutive sentence
I changed it to
你说过的永远
跟随海浪浮潜
and also other other things
most imptly, she help me think of title!
ah but this is probably a rough draft though.. course if the music ever comes up...
I would need to change the sentence structure.. or the number of words.. etc...

but I am suppose to be studying now..
hahahahahahahha